Reflection on Comments

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I received a lot of good comments from my peers. It feels good to know that people appreciate my paper and helps me see the flaws that I can change. I should add more explanation on the in-text citation as stated from one of my peers. The reason I forget to do this is that I always assume people know what I am thinking in my head.

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